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Wednesday, 8 June 2011

Self Improvement

 This is for Three Word Wednesday
The words are alter, fond and tranquil






 I alter my ways
To discover what is best
For my future self

                                                                                                     Those I am fond of
Tell me I needed to change
And to better myself


Find tranquil times
Be loved and love in return
I'll be a good person




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Copyright Andy McDonald - Fiction is an Addiction
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19 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 June 2011 at 12:11

    I love the first stanza sometimes we need a change in perspective and certainly to stop repeating the same destructive behavior patterns nice job!

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  2. Tashtoo8 June 2011 at 12:45

    My only goal this trip round the bubble is to be the best I can be no matter what might get thrown at me. Sometimes I win, sometimes I fail. I have a personal moment for each of the words above, and I think you've done a wonderful job here. Happily following, and thanking you for your visit in return! Here's to evolving! :)

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  3. gautami tripathy8 June 2011 at 12:58

    Liked the first one...

    eye for an eye

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  4. Laurie Kolp8 June 2011 at 14:10

    Love how they flow... I especially like the last one.

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  5. Altonian8 June 2011 at 15:02

    A very good trio, I like the good intentions in the last.

    Check mine again - there's an addendum!!!!

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  6. Victoria8 June 2011 at 15:42

    I like the different takes, inside, outside, back to inside - and "be oved and love in return"

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  7. Lilibeth8 June 2011 at 16:10

    Advice from those you are fond of is well given and should be well taken. Looks like a plan. Keep writing. I'll try to stop in and follow along.

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  8. VL Sheridan8 June 2011 at 17:25

    Yes, tranquility is so important. Nice use of the words.

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  9. Ren8 June 2011 at 19:22

    So very true :)

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  10. Sheilagh Lee8 June 2011 at 19:26

    We all need to change and grow to become the best person we can be.Lovely haikus

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  11. Christine Gail8 June 2011 at 19:55

    Colourful use of the words. I enjoyed reading all of them.

    Christy

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  12. Anonymous8 June 2011 at 20:29

    Nice play on the prompt words. Wisdom lies within the haikus.

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  13. Andy Sewina8 June 2011 at 21:01

    Phew, I keep saying that I'll be good too, hope it works for you!

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  14. Anonymous8 June 2011 at 21:51

    Interesting flow of thought! It works hun, no fear about that ;) Love your background here too, but I'm a renowned bookworm

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  15. Jess PJ9 June 2011 at 00:24

    a lovely trio, nicely tied together.

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  16. Mary9 June 2011 at 01:42

    There are always things a person can work on. Perfection is illusive, but we are all human. I like your work, Andy.

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  17. Kwee Cats and Art9 June 2011 at 11:31

    I like the flow and rhythm. Also the notion, or association, that for tranquility, there must be a reception and giving of love. Interesting in now you thought in writing this. Are you altering really for your better future self? Or because those you are fond of think you need to better yourself? Such an interesting thought process you have going here. I like it :-)

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  18. Thom Gabrukiewicz9 June 2011 at 16:36

    Well crafted, and true, too.

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  19. rebecca12 June 2011 at 15:09

    I loved this. Short but powerful in its message. We should all aspire same.

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