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Tuesday, 14 June 2011

Opportunity

This is for Carry On Tuesday
This week we have to use the title of the Abba song
Slipping through my fingers 


 

Opportunity dies
Slipping through my fingers, breaking
Fragments elude grip



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10 comments:

  1. Ah, yes, Andy. So true, so true.

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  2. I really like, "the breaking fragments." That phrase deserves a poem unto itself.

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  3. Yes, succinctly put..and the image fits the words to perfection..hopefully this comment will post - have been trying to return your visits for sometime..finally downloaded Google chrome which seems to help..thanks for stopping by! Jae

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  4. Nice one and I agree the picture fits perfectly!

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  5. That's a very good haiku, but I hate to be reminded of how many opportunities I have let slip over the years.

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  6. I appreciate your attention to form, but hope the verse doesn't represent truth!

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/20/red-door-opportunity/

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  7. Whoa - I can relate! Well and succinctly said.

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