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Wednesday, 1 June 2011

Alcohol's Warning

 This is for Three Word Wednesday. The words this week are Luminous, Erratic and Omen


Luminous lights in the club
Iluminate activities of scores
of people drunk and erratic
Dancing on tables and floors

They forget about booze
Tommorow's omen it's true
You'll feel like you're dying
Alcohol has warned you


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8 comments:

  1. I like it . I hate alcohol

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  2. Andy, you have nailed a good message with these three words.

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  3. Good poem and good message. It has a good punch at the end. Nice job.

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  4. Informative and true. I love writings that leave a message that can be taken to everyday life. Thanks. My 3WW: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/06/02/dare/

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  5. Phew, I've just gone two days without a drink, and stayed out of the pub for the last six - man I'm thirsty!

    Thanks for the warning!!

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