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Wednesday, 1 June 2011

Alcohol's Warning

 This is for Three Word Wednesday. The words this week are Luminous, Erratic and Omen


Luminous lights in the club
Iluminate activities of scores
of people drunk and erratic
Dancing on tables and floors

They forget about booze
Tommorow's omen it's true
You'll feel like you're dying
Alcohol has warned you


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Copyright Andy McDonald - Fiction is an Addiction

8 comments:

  1. Jackie1 June 2011 at 18:13

    I like it . I hate alcohol

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  2. Sheilagh Lee1 June 2011 at 19:04

    HAHa yes that's hangover.

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  3. Jess PJ1 June 2011 at 21:28

    great use of the words

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  4. Mary2 June 2011 at 01:32

    Andy, you have nailed a good message with these three words.

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  5. gsb32 June 2011 at 02:01

    Good poem and good message. It has a good punch at the end. Nice job.

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  6. Anonymous2 June 2011 at 19:00

    Informative and true. I love writings that leave a message that can be taken to everyday life. Thanks. My 3WW: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/06/02/dare/

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  7. Andy Sewina3 June 2011 at 00:44

    Phew, I've just gone two days without a drink, and stayed out of the pub for the last six - man I'm thirsty!

    Thanks for the warning!!

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  8. Anonymous5 June 2011 at 15:57

    This is great haha

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