This poem is born of my own opinion of heaven and hell. Although I am not religious I do find the whole heaven and hell saga and tales of angels and demons and whatnot a fascinating fiction.
It is for One Shot Wednesday
and Poets Pantry 52
It is for One Shot Wednesday
and Poets Pantry 52
The tale of heaven
And of hell
Tells us how
Lucifer fell
You think him evil
Think him deadly
Yet his fall
Was born of envy
It was the free will
God gave to men
That made him rebel
And ask why them?
The angels rights
Were all but none
They did as ordered
Or they were gone
Their envy strong
Some did rebel
Wanting free will
They were sent to hell
In heaven your free will
Is brought to a cease
In hell you may do
Whatever you please
Heaven or hell?
Give me hell please!
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oo nice...i wonder if in heaven free will really is removed...surely compelled to worship but without the free will does it make it anything less than slavery...hmm...intriguing...
ReplyDeleteYes free up there
ReplyDeleteMight be something like splitting hairs
As it could make things unstable
So maybe all the freeness is a fable
Interesting thought
Is what your great write brought
Interesting slant, not sure I want either...maybe another go round would be nice.
ReplyDeleteReincarnation has a lot going for it...
ReplyDeleteI hear what you are saying, but I will still choose heaven!
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