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Monday, 30 May 2011

Storm War

This is a little haiku for Jingles Potluck where we had to use the idea of thunder/storms/rain to create a poem.



  
atmosphere at war
battles decide who will reign
stormcloud or clear day


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Copyright Andy McDonald - Fiction is an Addiction

12 comments:

  1. Anonymous30 May 2011 at 14:38

    Enjoyed it! I could picture the two of them in the sky with cudgels.
    Butterflies of time
    http://harivarasanam.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/the-storm/

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  2. Anonymous30 May 2011 at 15:29

    great write :)

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  3. Anonymous30 May 2011 at 16:51

    simple but powerful imagery

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall30 May 2011 at 18:14

    brilliant,
    a message is conveyed with so few words.
    cheers.
    :)

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  5. Rachel Hoyt31 May 2011 at 00:50

    This really made me think! Thankfully no storms are brewing in my neighborhood. :)

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  6. The Poet31 May 2011 at 01:39

    Hello Andy.
    I don't know anything about haiku, but I like what you did with this one.
    "atmosphere at war"...nice.

    Good job!

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  7. Maggie31 May 2011 at 03:22

    A precise and topical, not tropical, account.

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  8. Olivia31 May 2011 at 09:59

    Absolutely breathtaking!
    Well said Andy.. xoxox

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  9. Anonymous31 May 2011 at 14:59

    Fantastic haiku I just love than opening line

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  10. Anonymous31 May 2011 at 20:26

    paring it down, great economy with words. Fine haiku Sir

    Luke @ WordSalad

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  11. Anonymous1 June 2011 at 19:26

    extremely clever! like it alot.

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  12. Anonymous17 June 2011 at 17:51

    I'm with everyone else. I really liked the first line!

    Umm....you've been tagged. Come over to my blog for the details.

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