This is a little haiku for Jingles Potluck where we had to use the idea of thunder/storms/rain to create a poem.
atmosphere at war
battles decide who will reign
stormcloud or clear day
If you like it please share it
battles decide who will reign
stormcloud or clear day
If you like it please share it
Enjoyed it! I could picture the two of them in the sky with cudgels.
ReplyDeleteButterflies of time
http://harivarasanam.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/the-storm/
great write :)
ReplyDeletesimple but powerful imagery
ReplyDeletebrilliant,
ReplyDeletea message is conveyed with so few words.
cheers.
:)
This really made me think! Thankfully no storms are brewing in my neighborhood. :)
ReplyDeleteHello Andy.
ReplyDeleteI don't know anything about haiku, but I like what you did with this one.
"atmosphere at war"...nice.
Good job!
A precise and topical, not tropical, account.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely breathtaking!
ReplyDeleteWell said Andy.. xoxox
Fantastic haiku I just love than opening line
ReplyDeleteparing it down, great economy with words. Fine haiku Sir
ReplyDeleteLuke @ WordSalad
extremely clever! like it alot.
ReplyDeleteI'm with everyone else. I really liked the first line!
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