This is my entry for the Promising Poets Parking Lot Thursday Rally
If you have a dream
That you wish from your life
Don't keep it locked up
In your mind
Let it out
Free your dream
Let it fly
Watch it swirl in the clouds
Like a bird
Let it fly
Let it soar
Let it roam
Let it blow in the breeze
Let it truly exist
Let your dream leave your mind
When you wake from your dreams
You will hardly believe
With your waking eyes you will see
That with will and belief
Dreams can become real
very true let it free...
ReplyDeleteFollow your dreams! Lovely! :)
ReplyDelete"That with will and belief..." True. Dreams don't just fulfill themselves while we sit on our butts. Too many people wring their hands and moan about not getting something they want, when they couldn't be bothered to put in any effort.
ReplyDeleteI wish to do so. I keep forgetting, thanks for reminding!
ReplyDeleteRight. I'll try doing the last stanza tonight.
ReplyDeleteHere is my entry for the rally, by the way.
www.mihirvatsa.wordpress.com
what a lovely hopeful ending - nice
ReplyDeleteI love "Let your dream leave your mind".
ReplyDeleteExcellent rally entry.
(Thanks for joining my Community, I've repaid the favor by following your blog too)
See you soon!
agreed,
ReplyDeletekeep dreaming...
;)
so true!
ReplyDeletei totally agree with your words,with will and belief dreams can come true!:)
Very very true. Freedom makes it all happen. Dare to dream.Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem.....
ReplyDeleteI am trying to dream ....after a long time...
Hope..."That with will and belief
Dreams can become real ".
Truly inspiring and full of hope! Love it!
ReplyDeleteRemarkable thought! Love it :)
ReplyDeletePowerful and sooo positive. It makes me feel alive and strong enough to achieve anything! Thank you! :D
ReplyDeleteVery thoughtful write... thanks.
ReplyDeleteInspiring and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteStraight up, free that mind. Liked it.
ReplyDeleteHenry Clemmons
I enjoyed reading your inspiring words~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful thoughts in which to live by thank you I will try to remember.
ReplyDeleteDreams don't always come true - but you can dream!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Andy,
ReplyDeleteI love the positivity, which flows from your words. Even if it was only a dream.....
Best wishes, Eileen
Wonderful and inspiring. Never loss that optimism!
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring. Your poem gives me a reminder to let my dreams fly high in the pone sky.
ReplyDeleteInspiring words....wishing I could take in all that positivity.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Making my dreams a reality now:)
ReplyDeleteOnce again I am reminded
ReplyDeleteOnce again...
Dreams are reality when fueled by action.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Genebrother
A whirling poem - like a leaf rushing before the wind.
ReplyDeleteAnd sentiments that uplift!
hmm I hear it all the time but not yet in my few decades have I seen it happen to me...nice piece though. Enjoy the rally
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Greetings,
ReplyDeleteHow is your day?
Please share your poetry with JP potluck today,
Have fun!
Love your talent, as always, appreciate your support very much!
Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are all welcome!
xoxox
A positve poem indeed - cheeers and thanks for joining our 50th potluck!
ReplyDeleteYou have a point - enjoyed reading this. :)
ReplyDeleteI've come to think of myself as as airy-heady idealist in some ways. This piece reminds me why I believe in dreams and continue to do so. Thank you for this expressing this, for letting it out, Andy. ^_^
ReplyDeleteQueenly
delightful write.
ReplyDeletejoin us if you did not do it yet.
Free flow of words as of the dreams...
ReplyDeletePositive vibes...
Lovely write.
Sentimental...LOVELY.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading your poem.
All blessings.